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Shaina Read's avatar

This gave me chills. Wonderfully written!

CFH's avatar

Thank you for reading and commenting! ❤️

Christian Moody's avatar

I know it’s fiction, but the jumps from describing the strawberry and the people interacting make it mysterious and possibly pulled from real life.

Not sure if that made sense, so here is a translation: I like it. 😆

CFH's avatar

Ahhhh thank you! I find it so hard to share my writing so this means the world to me.